Index: libs/spirit/doc/qi_and_karma/employee.qbk
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--- libs/spirit/doc/qi_and_karma/employee.qbk	(revision 49828)
+++ libs/spirit/doc/qi_and_karma/employee.qbk	(working copy)
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
 demonstrates some features of Spirit2 that makes this easy. In the process,
 you'll learn about:
 
-* More about attributes
+* More attributes
 * Auto rules
 * Some more built-in parsers
 * Directives
@@ -26,8 +26,8 @@
 
 [tutorial_employee_struct]
 
-Then, we need to tell __fusion__ about our employee struct to make it a first-
-class fusion citizen. If you don't know fusion yet, it is a __boost__ library
+Then, we need to tell __fusion__ about our employee struct to make it a
+first-class fusion citizen. If you don't know fusion yet, it is a __boost__ library
 for working with heterogenous collections of data, commonly referred to as
 tuples. Spirit uses fusion extensively as part of its infrastructure.
 
@@ -61,12 +61,12 @@
 
     employee_parser() : employee_parser::base_type(start)
 
-Initializes the base class.
+Initialize the base class.
 
     rule<Iterator, std::string(), space_type> quoted_string;
     rule<Iterator, employee(), space_type> start;
 
-Declares two rules: `quoted_string` and `start`. `start` has the same template
+Declare two rules: `quoted_string` and `start`. `start` has the same template
 parameters as the grammar itself. `quoted_string` has a `std::string` attribute.
 
 [heading Lexeme]
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@
 
     a - b
 
-parses `a` but not `b`. Its attribute is just `A`, the attribute of `a`. `b`'s
+parses `a` but not `b`. Its attribute is just `A`; the attribute of `a`. `b`'s
 attribute is ignored. Hence, the attribute of:
 
     char_ - '"'
@@ -98,8 +98,8 @@
 
     +a
 
-is the close kin of the kleene star we got so used to in our tutorial. Like it's
-kin, the kleene star, its attribute is a `std::vector<A>` where `A` is the
+is the close kin of the Kleene star we got so used to in our tutorial. Like its
+kin, the Kleene star, its attribute is a `std::vector<A>` where `A` is the
 attribute of `a`. So, putting all these together, the attribute of
 
     +(char_ - '"')
@@ -143,9 +143,9 @@
 
     fusion::vector<std::vector<char> >
 
-But wait, there's one more collapsing rule: If after the attribute is a single
-element `fusion::vector`, The element is stripped naked from its container. So,
-to make a long story short, the attribute of the expression:
+But wait, there's one more collapsing rule: If the attribute is followed by a 
+single element `fusion::vector`, the element is stripped naked from its container.
+To make a long story short, the attribute of the expression:
 
     '"' >> +(char_ - '"') >> '"'
 
@@ -159,9 +159,9 @@
 
     r = p[_val = _1];
 
-If you have a rule definition like above where the attribute of the RHS (right
-hand side) of the rule is compatibe with the attribute of the LHS (left hand
-side), then you can rewrite it as:
+If you have a rule definition such as the above, where the attribute of the RHS
+(right hand side) of the rule is compatible with the attribute of the LHS (left
+hand side), you can rewrite it as:
 
     r %= p;